Reflecting basic- proficient understanding of outlets. You identify appropriate outlets but don't offer enough examples to illustrate your points. For example if you google Warp Film's official website you can support your reasons for Warp films as a possible insitution for funding your film (if it were developed) but you need to explain why in particular your film would appeal to the audience Warp films is targetting. For example Warp Films website references a number of contemporary films which tend to be about young men in crisis, thus you need to explain what your film has in common with another Warp film.
You explain rather vaguelly that your film could upset certain people, you need to explain exactly whom or discuss aspects of homophobia pumped out by the popular media. Very well presented Charlie but not enough examples to place you firmly in the upper band of Level 3.
Reflecting basic- proficient understanding of outlets. You identify appropriate outlets but don't offer enough examples to illustrate your points. For example if you google Warp Film's official website you can support your reasons for Warp films as a possible insitution for funding your film (if it were developed) but you need to explain why in particular your film would appeal to the audience Warp films is targetting. For example Warp Films website references a number of contemporary films which tend to be about young men in crisis, thus you need to explain what your film has in common with another Warp film.
ReplyDeleteYou explain rather vaguelly that your film could upset certain people, you need to explain exactly whom or discuss aspects of homophobia pumped out by the popular media.
Very well presented Charlie but not enough examples to place you firmly in the upper band of Level 3.