Extreme close up on child’s eye-
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Close up tilt shot focusing on father’s watch-
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High close up of father touching child’s leg-
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Close up on the front of the car/ with child exiting the car in- the background
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Low close up of boy walking into toilet-
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Follow tilt shot tracking child to toilet or high angled tilt shot of child entering the toilet-
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Extreme close up on fathers watch-
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Extreme close up of child’s phone-
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Close up follow shot of father’s feet-
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Close up of father pushing toilet doors open (repeats)-
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P.O.V of father being stabbed ( killer’s point of view)-
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low shot of father collapsing to the floor-
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P.O.V of child opening the door from fathers point of view (tilt) like in the third man-
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Low close up of child crowding over father
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~Fade out~
A clear and focused shot list and a good story board reflecting understanding of composition and camera angles.
ReplyDeleteYou may wish to consider an alternative cliff hanger:
Cut from boy hunched over his father to:
A close up over the shoulder shot of a girl (Chelsea) standing at the end of the cubicles (using rule of thirds) cut to
The girl exits out of the door (intensifying the notion of enigma) and either a collaborator in the attack on the older man or the attacker (unlikely) or a witness!!
Thus you could shoot two cliff hangers and then consider which you prefer. Remember you will be editing separately.
Have a think!